"Rewrite the text below for clarity. Preserve every fact, number, and commitment exactly; change only the expression. It is important to note that the implementation of the new onboarding flow, which was undertaken by the team over the course of the last quarter, has resulted in improvements with respect to activation metrics, with a considerable number of users, approximately 40 percent more than previously, now reaching the point of completion of the setup process within their first session. Rules: 1. One idea per sentence. Break any sentence over 25 words. 2. Replace abstract nouns with the verb they hide (utilization: use; implementation: build). 3. Delete throat-clearing openers and hedges that carry no information. 4. Keep the author's terms for domain concepts; do not synonymize technical vocabulary. 5. Active voice unless the actor is genuinely unknown. Output: the rewrite, then a list of the 3 worst offenses you fixed, quoting before and after for each."
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